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What about all the conjecture and creative additions to the Achura background that have been produced by players? I think Ginger is working on a structure for this, but no page exists yet? --[[Contributor name:Blake Rathen|Blake Rathen]] 15:15, 16 July 2009 (GMT) | What about all the conjecture and creative additions to the Achura background that have been produced by players? I think Ginger is working on a structure for this, but no page exists yet? --[[Contributor name:Blake Rathen|Blake Rathen]] 15:15, 16 July 2009 (GMT) | ||
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| + | ===Monk==== | ||
| + | the description change it used to say this | ||
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| + | ''Thousands of monasteries are scattered around Saisio III, operated by dozens of different monastic orders. While each order has its own code of conduct regarding member behavior, celibacy and other issues, they all agree on one thing; that only by perfecting the body can you perfect the soul''. | ||
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| + | seems CCP changed it wounder why | ||
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| + | == Discovering the Achura mysteries == | ||
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| + | I'm a native German. So I see no chance to make anything better using foreign languages. Moreover I'm in the game for only a few months. So I have no overview over all the written fiction. But looking for "Achura" only delivers a small amount of informations. Therfore I believe in a stepkind beeing of the Achura in EvE fiction. | ||
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| + | Why Saisio III is inhabitable for Achura? As I saw flighing around it's still an inhabitable world. The fiction does'nt tell me anything about. It's a pity. | ||
| + | Does the reason to leave Saisio III found any reflection in religious thought and daily living? Achura were no slaves. They assist in building and running mining facilities. But this raised another question... | ||
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| + | Why Achura are followers of Caldari? There "religion" is really different from the daily believing of Caldari people. Achura are far away from a material world. So I think they are near to Intaki Reborn. It should be more harder to get standing with empire races. Achura are not interested in other races and their empire conflicts. This might have precedence over an introverted sight. | ||
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| + | If articles about Achura are written, this may done from a neutral point of view or from an Achura in mind. :) | ||
| + | I strongly believe that Achura have a great and interesting history what's worth to be discovered. So the arc around the stolen artefacts could become a real epic arc or new Archurish epic arcs may be inserted to the game. | ||
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| + | Why Achura supress emotions? The "vulcanic way" was the believing in emotions causing conflicts. But Achura are no Vulcanish people. :) | ||
| + | Moreover Achura could be really evil, if the "great picture" needs victims. Achura are not pacifistic. No, they are not interested in aliens fate only. | ||
| + | So Achura are a really interesting and polarizing race. | ||
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| + | It would be really great to get more details about already given poor informations as asked above. And yes, I really would like to help the Achura become more present in fiction, if I could do that in German language. | ||
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| + | :''Wäre mal nicht schlecht. :) Zum mindest der letzte Teil :)... I kann dann versuchen ein, zwei Sachen zu übersetzen oder gar beantworten. Also ich weiß nicht ob Mercury gegenwärtig rekrutiert, aber falls du an der Lore mitarbeiten möchtest würde ich dir raten dich bei ihnen zu melden; oder im offiziellen forum im [https://forums.eveonline.com/default.aspx?g=topics&f=259 Fiction-subforum] nachzuschauen. [[Demographics of the Caldari State]] könnte dir sollange vielleicht einzwei fragen beantworten.'' | ||
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| + | :--[[Publius Valerius (Character) |Publius Valerius]] 13:45, 19.12.2012 (CET) | ||
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| + | Also if "Mercury" will have no "job" for me, it should not stop me making philosophic fiction as this race is worth to. | ||
| + | But if I start generationg fiction in German, you could be out soon. In some kind of forums I'm wellknown as the "man who makes too much words". I'm notorius for novels instead of short stories. :D | ||
| + | The given links I already read mostly. In my humble opinion there is not enough fictional substance for roleplaying an Achura well. Pointing to eastern bloodlines and Buddhism might be a hint but when I read several crosslinked fictional contents here, there come up completely new points of view. And this is, what's making such an interesting "religion" or better community. [Pearl Canopus] | ||
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| + | :As I already mention, Mercury could be a good choice and I totally forgot [http://community.eveonline.com/devblog.asp?a=blog&nbid=74047 they are recruiting]. If you like you can always put something on the talk-page. As I have done and still do, you can count from time to time someone comes by and checks what he can use. | ||
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| + | :As suggestion: I would say, collect all the know stuff.... than add something "new-ish" to it. It means that you - on the start - will have a huge info dumb (like currently the talk page of the Khanid Kingdom or the Ammatar Mandate page), They are far from finish, but a good start where have at least all the information together in ones place. About the general style: I would say, make like the new ethnic Gallente pages (just put together in ones). What I mean with it?... try to use the same topics and headers. But of course all just a suggestion. The easiest way would be just to sign up for Mercury (They answer it just takes time, I got ones really far... to the personal Interview with and ISD. Sadly never heared anything else. But it shouldnt stop you :P ). | ||
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| + | :Wie ich schon vorher sagte: Mercury sollte für dich der beste Platz sein (siehe link oben). Wenn du möchtest, kannst du aber auch jederzeit etwas auf Talk-page hinterlassen. | ||
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| + | :Als kleiner Vorschlag: Sammele alle bekannten Details.... dann bringe sie in eine gewisse Ordung und zum schluß ergenze einige lücken mit "neuen""/neu interpretierten" Lore Elmenten. Das heißt natürlich, dass du am Anfang einfach nur eine große Ansammlung von Infromation zu einem bestimmten Thema haben wirst (siehe die Ammatar Mandte seite oder die Talk-page von der Khanid Kigdom seite). Beide sind bei weiten nicht fertig, sogar sehr weit entfernt davon. Über den allgemeinen Aufbau: Versuche sie wie die neuen ethnic Gallente seiten zu gestalten: Also mit dem selben Themenabschnitten und Überschriften. Natürlich ist, dass alles nur ein Vorschlag; denn am Ende habe ich nichts zu melden. So wie schon erwähnt, der beste und einfachste Weg ist: Wenn du dich einfach bei Mercury bewirbst. | ||
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| + | :--[[Publius Valerius (Character) |Publius Valerius]] 17:38, 19.12.2012 (CET) | ||
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| + | :P.S. Wie gesagt, kann auch bei einigen Übersetzungen helfen. Fly save :) | ||
Latest revision as of 10:38, 19 December 2012
Neutrality
I'm not really seeing the neutral tone in this one. There's a lot of stuff in the article that should probably be here in the discussion page instead. - Stitcher
Neutrality
I agree with Stitcher. In addition, the article should not be written from a personal perspective.
- Feel free to edit the page as you see fit - if you think you can make it better please do ISD Erilus Nex 14:56, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
Player Fiction
What about all the conjecture and creative additions to the Achura background that have been produced by players? I think Ginger is working on a structure for this, but no page exists yet? --Blake Rathen 15:15, 16 July 2009 (GMT)
Monk=
the description change it used to say this
Thousands of monasteries are scattered around Saisio III, operated by dozens of different monastic orders. While each order has its own code of conduct regarding member behavior, celibacy and other issues, they all agree on one thing; that only by perfecting the body can you perfect the soul.
seems CCP changed it wounder why
Othar
Discovering the Achura mysteries
I'm a native German. So I see no chance to make anything better using foreign languages. Moreover I'm in the game for only a few months. So I have no overview over all the written fiction. But looking for "Achura" only delivers a small amount of informations. Therfore I believe in a stepkind beeing of the Achura in EvE fiction.
Why Saisio III is inhabitable for Achura? As I saw flighing around it's still an inhabitable world. The fiction does'nt tell me anything about. It's a pity. Does the reason to leave Saisio III found any reflection in religious thought and daily living? Achura were no slaves. They assist in building and running mining facilities. But this raised another question...
Why Achura are followers of Caldari? There "religion" is really different from the daily believing of Caldari people. Achura are far away from a material world. So I think they are near to Intaki Reborn. It should be more harder to get standing with empire races. Achura are not interested in other races and their empire conflicts. This might have precedence over an introverted sight.
If articles about Achura are written, this may done from a neutral point of view or from an Achura in mind. :) I strongly believe that Achura have a great and interesting history what's worth to be discovered. So the arc around the stolen artefacts could become a real epic arc or new Archurish epic arcs may be inserted to the game.
Why Achura supress emotions? The "vulcanic way" was the believing in emotions causing conflicts. But Achura are no Vulcanish people. :) Moreover Achura could be really evil, if the "great picture" needs victims. Achura are not pacifistic. No, they are not interested in aliens fate only. So Achura are a really interesting and polarizing race.
It would be really great to get more details about already given poor informations as asked above. And yes, I really would like to help the Achura become more present in fiction, if I could do that in German language.
- Wäre mal nicht schlecht. :) Zum mindest der letzte Teil :)... I kann dann versuchen ein, zwei Sachen zu übersetzen oder gar beantworten. Also ich weiß nicht ob Mercury gegenwärtig rekrutiert, aber falls du an der Lore mitarbeiten möchtest würde ich dir raten dich bei ihnen zu melden; oder im offiziellen forum im Fiction-subforum nachzuschauen. Demographics of the Caldari State könnte dir sollange vielleicht einzwei fragen beantworten.
- --Publius Valerius 13:45, 19.12.2012 (CET)
Also if "Mercury" will have no "job" for me, it should not stop me making philosophic fiction as this race is worth to. But if I start generationg fiction in German, you could be out soon. In some kind of forums I'm wellknown as the "man who makes too much words". I'm notorius for novels instead of short stories. :D The given links I already read mostly. In my humble opinion there is not enough fictional substance for roleplaying an Achura well. Pointing to eastern bloodlines and Buddhism might be a hint but when I read several crosslinked fictional contents here, there come up completely new points of view. And this is, what's making such an interesting "religion" or better community. [Pearl Canopus]
- As I already mention, Mercury could be a good choice and I totally forgot they are recruiting. If you like you can always put something on the talk-page. As I have done and still do, you can count from time to time someone comes by and checks what he can use.
- As suggestion: I would say, collect all the know stuff.... than add something "new-ish" to it. It means that you - on the start - will have a huge info dumb (like currently the talk page of the Khanid Kingdom or the Ammatar Mandate page), They are far from finish, but a good start where have at least all the information together in ones place. About the general style: I would say, make like the new ethnic Gallente pages (just put together in ones). What I mean with it?... try to use the same topics and headers. But of course all just a suggestion. The easiest way would be just to sign up for Mercury (They answer it just takes time, I got ones really far... to the personal Interview with and ISD. Sadly never heared anything else. But it shouldnt stop you :P ).
- Wie ich schon vorher sagte: Mercury sollte für dich der beste Platz sein (siehe link oben). Wenn du möchtest, kannst du aber auch jederzeit etwas auf Talk-page hinterlassen.
- Als kleiner Vorschlag: Sammele alle bekannten Details.... dann bringe sie in eine gewisse Ordung und zum schluß ergenze einige lücken mit "neuen""/neu interpretierten" Lore Elmenten. Das heißt natürlich, dass du am Anfang einfach nur eine große Ansammlung von Infromation zu einem bestimmten Thema haben wirst (siehe die Ammatar Mandte seite oder die Talk-page von der Khanid Kigdom seite). Beide sind bei weiten nicht fertig, sogar sehr weit entfernt davon. Über den allgemeinen Aufbau: Versuche sie wie die neuen ethnic Gallente seiten zu gestalten: Also mit dem selben Themenabschnitten und Überschriften. Natürlich ist, dass alles nur ein Vorschlag; denn am Ende habe ich nichts zu melden. So wie schon erwähnt, der beste und einfachste Weg ist: Wenn du dich einfach bei Mercury bewirbst.
- --Publius Valerius 17:38, 19.12.2012 (CET)
- P.S. Wie gesagt, kann auch bei einigen Übersetzungen helfen. Fly save :)