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| − | ;Opps, looks like there's another couple of errors. In this bit<nowiki>:</nowiki> <font color=green>"the death of Aghaver Xarasier, a famous technological pioneer , when the micro jump drive"</font>, you will notice an extra space after the word "pioneer". Also, since his name appears differently in the [[Duvolle_Laboratories]] article, "Aghaver Xarasier" should probably be "Avagher Xarasier"... switch the positions of 'v' and the 'gh' (assuming of course they are the same person). | + | ;Opps, looks like there's another couple of errors. In this bit<nowiki>:</nowiki> <font color=green>"the death of Aghaver Xarasier, a famous technological pioneer , when the micro jump drive"</font>, you will notice an extra space after the word "pioneer". Also, since his name appears differently in the [[Duvolle_Laboratories]] article, "Aghaver Xarasier" should probably be "Avagher Xarasier"... switch the positions of 'v' and the 'gh' (assuming of course they are the same person). --[[User:Faulx|Faulx]] 1127, 24 May 2012 |
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There is a typo here: "in-flight tests led to the death involved the death of Aghaver Xarasier,".... One of the "death"s should be removed - Faulx 1308, 23 May 2012
Fixed, thanks!--CCP Abraxas 13:52, 23 May 2012 (GMT)
- Opps, looks like there's another couple of errors. In this bit: "the death of Aghaver Xarasier, a famous technological pioneer , when the micro jump drive", you will notice an extra space after the word "pioneer". Also, since his name appears differently in the Duvolle_Laboratories article, "Aghaver Xarasier" should probably be "Avagher Xarasier"... switch the positions of 'v' and the 'gh' (assuming of course they are the same person). --Faulx 1127, 24 May 2012