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In the section "Further Setbacks", the head of the Lai Dai research team is referred to as both Holene Vailakkel and Holene Vailakkei. | In the section "Further Setbacks", the head of the Lai Dai research team is referred to as both Holene Vailakkel and Holene Vailakkei. | ||
| − | This is also the case in the original news report referenced. | + | This is also the case in the original news report referenced. [9] |
Revision as of 06:58, 23 June 2012
There is a typo here: "in-flight tests led to the death involved the death of Aghaver Xarasier,".... One of the "death"s should be removed - Faulx 1308, 23 May 2012
Fixed, thanks!--CCP Abraxas 13:52, 23 May 2012 (GMT)
- Opps, looks like there's another couple of errors. In this bit: "the death of Aghaver Xarasier, a famous technological pioneer , when the micro jump drive", you will notice an extra space after the word "pioneer". Also, since his name appears differently in the Duvolle_Laboratories article, "Aghaver Xarasier" should probably be "Avagher Xarasier"... switch the positions of 'v' and the 'gh' (assuming of course they are the same person). --Faulx 1127, 24 May 2012
Still available as an Agent and [Chief Researcher]. In the story line mission (Going Gallente) has his Daughter working for CreoDron and him described as THEIR Chief Research.
Avagher's been fixed on the lore page. We're aware of his in-game ... uh, status of ongoing vitality, and plan to summarily alter it at some point in the future.--CCP Abraxas 14:59, 30 May 2012 (GMT)
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In the section "Further Setbacks", the head of the Lai Dai research team is referred to as both Holene Vailakkel and Holene Vailakkei. This is also the case in the original news report referenced. [9]